FW: gay rights discussion on PlatCom

"X" is a PlatCom member who has given his permission for all his PlatCom
comments to be quoted publicly, but I think he'll reconsider these so I'm
not naming him.

I'd like feedback on the following proposed Platform language: "We favor
the freedom of all adults to engage in any consensual, amorous, or
reproductive behavior or relationship that does not violate the rights of
others. Sexuality or gender should have no discriminatory impact on the
treatment of individuals by government, such as in marriage, adoption,
immigration, or military service."