Phil,
Great responses!
My suggestions:
1. On two occasions you refer to "reforming the financial system." Why be so vague? Why not say what (I think) you mean: "Abolish the Fed." Here's a clear, positive, libertarian position, which differentiates us from the statists, and may excite a few natural, undiscovered libertarian readers and get one or two others to start cogitating.
2. Your response to the min. wage question is too technical--until the last sentence which says it all beautifully. It stands on its own. I suggest you have it as your entire answer: "Minimum wages sadly make everything that requires local labor more expensive, further punishing poor students, especially disabled students who can't work." Magnificent!
Best, Michael