RE: [lpsf-activists] Article On the SFPD Inefficiencies By Former SFPD Deputy Chief

Ron...I just spent about half an hour on the first couple of paragraphs.
While there's lots of good content there and I really appreciate the
work you did, it's not reading very well. I'm afraid we are going to
need a professional to clean it up as I don't have time to do what
appears to be a rather big job. Let me know and I'll chip in to support
the project.

Mike